The 2015 Black Knight Short Story Competition

Entry No 5            


THE NEXT DATE

by Roberto Mustacchi

Pete had never really been comfortable around women.  Work was fine.  Relatives weren’t a problem.  He got along well with his friends’ girlfriends and wives.  He had no problems with women “friends” that had made it clear early on that dating wasn’t an option.  Actually Pete’s problem, he realized, was getting to know new women, eligible women, the women that he wanted to date.

Not that Pete was a bad looking guy, at least not since he had turned 30 and dropped 30 pounds, calling it the 30 at 30.  His improved his self-esteem had led to a couple of promotions at work.  His career was definitely on an upward track, but his love life wasn’t derailed, it hadn’t even left the track.  Pete couldn’t get up the nerve t ask a woman out on a date.

It all went back to Karen Saunders.  She had been one of the A-list girls in high school - - pretty and social.  In hindsight, she was the type of girl about which they had made the movie “Mean Girls”.  She was in his algebra class where Pete, something of a nerd, was a star while Karen was struggling to pass.  When she had asked him for help, Pete jumped at the chance and helped her get a solid B.  The next year, Pete was guiding her to a B in geometry. 

She would thank him all the time, telling him that without his help, her grades would have gotten her grounded and that she wouldn’t be able to get into a good college. They had never done anything other than to study together, but he thought that they were friends.  Six weeks before junior prom, Pete worked up the nerve to ask her out. 

Fifteen years later, her answer still hurt.  She didn’t just say no - - she screamed, so that everyone around them could hear, “What makes you think that I would go out with a loser like you?” 

Pete heard her friends laugh and his humiliation was complete.

Now 32, Pete’s life was going well.  He was in good shape having lost his “30 at 30”, working out three or four times a week.  He was both proud of and enjoyed his job and the salary that came with it.  He would generally be considered a good catch. 

On the other hand, he lacked of confidence to ask a woman out on a date.  Every now and then a friend or cousin would fix him up, but he had such a big chip on his shoulder that it would always be over in only a date or two.  He felt that if it was a fix-up, it was because he and/or his date was a loser.

His buddy Hal had suggested that Pete volunteer at the tutoring center where Hal volunteered - - the program was looking for people that could help tutor math and technology.  About a year ago, Pete had met Sarah at the center and as far as he was concerned, Sarah was damned near perfect.

Sarah had been tutoring reading at the center for the past two years years and had run Pete’s new tutor orientation.  Despite the fact that she was cute, Pete was comfortable talking with her about the program.  They talked about the kids, techniques, subject matter, etc.  He quickly learned that Sarah had been dating the same guy for over a year, which made her was safe.

They didn’t see each other outside of the tutoring center.  Instead, they would chat for a half hour while munching on a sandwich before the Monday evening tutoring sessions would begin.  They weren’t what Pete would call friends, but they were certainly friendly.

That Sarah told Pete about her break-up was more coincidence than anything else.  Pete just happened to be the first person that she saw after she found out that her good-for-nothing, now ex-boyfriend had been cheating on her.  Pete responded in the only way he knew how - - he listened.  Sarah was clearly upset and appreciated Pete’s non-judgmental ear.  For his part, as they walked to meet their students, Pete could tell that Sarah was still upset.  Without realizing it he suggested that they get a cup of coffee when tutoring was over so they could continue talking.  Sarah gratefully accepted. 

After tutoring, they found a late night Starbucks and by the time Pete had spent another hour-and-a-half listening, Sarah was clearly feeling better. Pete was really enjoying being with Sarah and realized that he wanted to go out with her again. Should he ask her?  He thought that she might say yes, but it was too soon after her break up.  If he asked too soon, he would piss her off.  If he waited too long, he would miss his chance. 

As he debated with himself, Sarah suddenly said, “Pete thanks for being such a good friend.  I’d really like to go out with you again.  Let’s go to my squash club this Saturday night”.

“S-sure”, Pete stammered, caught completely off guard.

“Great!  Here’s my address.  Come by my place at 5:30 and we’ll go together.   Gotta run.  Bye!” and with that, she was off.

Pete stood there open mouthed.  Not only had he not botched their “first date”, she had asked him out for the second date and a Saturday night date at that.  She was even going to take him to a place where she was known, where she would be seen in “public” with him.

“Her squash club - oh, crap! - her squash club”, Pete thought a bit nervously. 

Pete hadn’t played squash since he was in college. He had been an okay player, but that was over 10 years ago and he didn’t have a racquet, shoes or any of the other gear he would need to play.  He decided that when he got home from work tomorrow night, he would go to the new Sport’s Authority that had opened three blocks from his house and buy everything that he needed. 

Pete had had to work late Tuesday so by the time he got to the store it was after 7:30.  As he walked in, the greeter asked him if she could help him.

“Hi”, Pete responded to the greeter, “I’m looking for a squash racquet, shoes, goggles, etcetera”.

Her smile dimmed, “Oh. Sorry.  You’ll have to go to one of our larger stores.  We only carry gear for the major sports at this store”.  Next stop, the mall.  Pete hoped that he would get there before this next store closed.

 Over $350 dollars later, Pete had the gear he needed to play.  Earlier that day, he had called an old college friend that he knew played squash and belonged to a club with at least two squash courts.  “Hi, Stan.  It’s Pete.  I need a favor”, said Pete. 

He explained his situation and Stan agreed that they could get together on Wednesday and Thursday evenings plus Saturday morning.  After three sessions of practicing with Stan, plus a number of beers to say thank-you, Pete felt that he had gotten in enough practice and wouldn’t embarrass him self.

Pete realized that he had spent more money on this date than on any other date he had ever been on and he hadn’t even picked her up.  He sure hoped that there would be a third date.

Finally, dressed in shorts and his new court shoes and with his racquet in hand, Pete rang Sarah’s doorbell.  She opened the door, looking great and with a big smile on her face and said “I went to the farmer’s market today.  I bought a couple of great looking Hubbard squash from one of the organic farmers.  I’ve already baked them and can’t wait to share them with the squash club.  Hey, what’s with that funny looking tennis racquet?”





This story and the stories in this contest are works of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents are either products of the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events or locales or persons, living or dead, or to any other works of fiction, is entirely coincidental.